Paid discovery · The page

A landing page review that tells you why your ad clicks aren't turning into leads.

I look at the pages your ads send people to, the way a new visitor sees them. What they read first, what stops them, and what the form asks. You get a ranked list of changes, in plain English, starting with the ones that cost you the most.

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See what your landing page looks like from outside first.

Seven checks on one landing page: tags, duplicate containers, consent blocking, mobile speed, forms. No login.


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Who it's for

If any of these sound like your last conversation about the ads, this is the right page.

"We're getting clicks, but hardly anyone fills in the form."

Usually the page doesn't say who it's for in the first few seconds.

"We get leads, but they're not the right people."

The page and the offer attract people who will never buy.

"The page looks fine to us."

You know your business. A new visitor doesn't.

"It works on desktop but not on phones."

Most ad clicks land on a phone, and the form is hard to use there.

The picture

One ad click, five moments where the lead can be lost before you see it.

01
Someone clicks your ad
Paid for
02
The page loads
Slow
03
They read the headline
Lost
04
They look at the form
Too long
05
They leave or submit
Gone
Scope

What goes in, and what comes back out.

One landing page (or a small set), checked by hand. Every finding says what I saw and why it matters, so you know what to change first. Rebuilding the page is not included; that’s a separate build.

The page
Headline
Offer
Proof and trust
Form
Mobile view
Under the page
Page speed
Page tracking
Landing page review
Output
Findings report
Ranked change list
Before and after
20-min walkthrough
Questions

What people ask before booking a landing page review.

Anything else, write to hi@vlbonite.co and I’ll answer it myself, usually the same day.

The page your ads send people to, looked at the way a new visitor sees it. I check the headline, the offer, proof and trust, the form, and how it all works on a phone. Under the page, I check speed and whether the form submission is tracked. You get a findings report, a ranked list of changes (the ones costing you most come first), before and after examples, and a 20-minute walkthrough.

Three business days, up to three pages. No call needed to start. Fixes are available at fixed prices, shown in your report.

The page link, and the ads that point to it so I can check the page matches what the ad promised. No logins needed for the page itself. If you want tracking checked in depth, viewer access to Google Tag Manager helps.

Not as part of the review. Each change is written so your developer or designer can make it. If you want me to rebuild it, that is a separate build quoted from the findings.

Then: the build

The review tells you what to change. The next step is making it happen.

Each of these is a fixed scope, quoted from the findings, so the conversation after the review is about the work and not the pitch.


Page rebuild

Quoted separately. I build the new version of the page from the findings.


Conversion tracking audit

Make sure every lead from the new page is counted once.


Lead follow-up automation

Get every new lead to the right person fast.

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